MARK OF THE WHIP 2

CAST IN ORDER OF APPEARANCE
POSTMAN:  new model 
SISTER ANNA: Zdenka Novotna
SISTER MARIA: ( new model same role)
SISTER SYLVIA: Tiffany Love
SISTER MONICA:new model 
SISTER AMANADA: new model 
NEWS READER: (Sarka)
MOTHER SUPERIOR (Maria Vaslova)
FARMER: (Who?)
1st HOOKER:  new model same role
OTHER HOOKERS:  (3 models)
PIMP: (Who?))
HOTEL RECEPTIONIST:  (Who?))
GESTAPO GUY: (Who?))
POLICEMAN 1: (Who?))
POLICEMAN 2:  (Who?))
ANDY(GunSeller):  (Who?))
OLD LADY: (Who?))
FANTOM WHIPPER: (Who?)

sort out fire and book  [NOT FILMED]

pre-titles (girl reads a book infront of the fire - hommage to tenebre)
“...the huge bullwhip strikes at her naked, sweat soaked body, wrapping itself around her stomach like a venomous snake. The stinging pain shoots through her. She can hardly catch her breath before she feels the next strike. Carla watches herself in the carefully placed mirror. She sees the tell-tale red marks across her beautiful outstretched body. She is slowly being broken. She feels aroused , ashamed and humiliated but still she can’t stop looking at herself in the mirror...HER BODY WAS BECOMING ADDICTED TO THE LASH OF THE WHIP!”

(2 mins)

TITLES  (in flames)
(3 mins)

SCENE 1  OPENING SCENE  (1A - DAY 1)

Long shot of a nunnery- nuns working the fields... bike passes from the foreground -it's the postman. Cycles past nuns working on the land. Same nuns play different nuns - fixed tripod to key in extra nuns

1) min - 3 nuns
2) postman
3) postmans outfit (Blue jacket, cap, bag, buke, letters)
4) postmans bag - Envelope, Letter.
5) Gardening tools/ rake/ hoe/ small fork
6) Newspaper (maybe sexy Cesky one)

Sister Anna: (looks up) Oh its the Postman. He hasn't been here for ages (Runs over to the postman and flirts) Hello stranger, what do you have for us today?
Postman: Just this I'm afraid. (Holds up a letter)
Sister Anna:  (Dissapointed) That's it?!
Postman: You're lucky to get even that. Didnt you hear about the strike?
Sister Anna:  We don't get to hear any news up here.
Postman:  Realy.  Here have this (Hands her his paper) I've read it already.
Sister Anna: Ok but don't let Mother Superior find out, she thinks its full of government properganda and mindless drivel to enebriate the masses!
Postman:  Ha She's probably right.. see ya (Cycles off)
Sister Anna: (opens the paper - Show sexy cover to camera - Cheap Cesky paper) Shit! He's done the Sidoku!
(Cut to path Sister Anna: walks along with letter and sees Sister Maria)

(DAY2 FOR CLOSE UPS OF SISTER MARIA)
Sister Anna: Look who's got a letter!
Sister Maria: (Takes Letter) Aaah (Happy)... (Reads it and says dissapointedly) Oh.. She's down there (Pointing slightly)
(Tech note: Sister Maria can be filmed on a different day - One other girl can play her from the back)

Sister Anna walks towards the a nun tending an area. Subjective shot.
Sister Anna: Hey aren't you the lucky one!
Sister Sylvia carries on working - digging the Garden
Sister Anna: Hey I'm talking to you Sister Sylvia - you've got a letter
Sister Sylvia: (Still digging) From Whom?
Sister Anna: (eyes to heavans then turns letter over and reads)  ... Some one called.... Kasia.
Sister Sylvia stops working then  slowly turns to face the camera. Takes letter
SIster Anna: (Whispers) I thought it might have been  a secret admirer.
Sister Sylvia: Dont be sily (opens it- starts to read it but sees Anna is still there) Thank you Sister Anna.
Sister Anna turns and leaves. Sylvia reads the letter  (voice over)

"Dear Sylvia,
I hope your new life is working out well, it must be quite a temptation with all those young girls around (Sylvia Smiles). I don't know how you sleep at night. Still, I know you'll be strong. UNfortunatley I can't say the same for myself. HE is asking me to do more and more extreme and dangerous tasks, but if I refuse I won't be whipped to orgasm. I really am hooked, I live for nothing else. YOu have managed to break the addiction, I think becoming a nun was the right idea and much cheaper than rehab. Anyway, wish me luck on my mission tonight, maybe you could say a prayer for me
. Your dearest friend... Kasia. "
(Tear comes from Sylvias eye - fade)
(4.00 mins)

SCENE 2

KASIA'S SCENE.....WHIPPED BUY THUGS IN MASKS  (ALREADY SHOT)

(12 mins)

SCENE 3  

NUN'S REFECTORY
Props: Chairs/armchairs, reigious stuff on walls, Bible (large), TV, TV ariel, ciggies, ashtray, newspaper.

(Nun's sit and chill, smoking, Sister Amanda  is hitting TV - and  shifting aerial)

Sister Anna: (Doing crossword in paper) The head of the catholic church, four letters, begins with a "P". Any ideas?
Nun Monica: Stop with that rubbish. Can you get a picture on this thing?
Sister Amanda: I'm trying  - (moves arial, hits it)
Sister Anna:  I thought we weren't allowed to watch television. You know what Mother Superior said "Its filled with nothing but sex and violence!"
Sister Amanda: Sounds like to good reasons to watch it!
Nun Monica:  Anyway, what Mother Superior doesn't know about, won't harm us. (watches TV)  Ooh leave this on, this is a great film.
(Show the scene from the first Nowicki film - in between a discussion - Changed to Mia drill scene)

Sister Amanda: MS is quite opinionated for a woman of the cloth don't you think?
Sister Anna:  Who's M.S?
Nun Monica:  Mother Superior?
Sister Anna: Oh.
Nun Monica:  She's also quite political. I saw her reading a pamphlet by the outlawed Pro-democracy group.
Sister Anna:  Really, she better watch out that could get her into trouble.
Sister Amanda: (Sitting down after fixing the picture) That could be quite useful information.
Nun Monica:  How do you mean?
Sister Amanda: Its always nice to have some blackmail up your sleeve incase she tries to curtail some of our privelages.
Sister Monica: You're evil.
Sister Anna: (to sister Sylvia sitting in the corner) What's that you're reading Sylvia?
Sister Sylivia:  The Bible.
Sister Anna: Jesus Sylvia. I thought you'd have had enough of that. 
Sister Sylvia: It's quite comforting.  (Camera Shows that Sylvia is really reading Kasia's letter)
(cut back to screen - gun in mouth - shoots NOT USED)
Sister  Monica: Yeah! (reacting to the violence on TV)
Sister Amanda: Oh that's gross (changes channels - to a news program)
News Reader: Police report that a women was found dead in a warehouse north of Ivancice.
Sister Monica: Hey that's not too far from here.
(NEWS READER - STUDIO)
News Reader: She had been found stripped naked, bound and apparently whipped to death.
(Sylvia looks up slowly) Forensics say she seems to have endured multiple orgams before dying. The Identity of the woman is still not known but the Police did find a video camera on the premisis. It seems they were filming her ordeal, maybe to sell as a perverted snuff movie. Police belive the assailants may have been disturbed 
Sister Anna: I'll say!
News reader: .. and ran off, forgetting  the incriminating piece of evidence. We are going to show part of that footage now in the hope that some one may recognise the victim.
Sister Sylvia: (Shows footage of Kasi being whipped - SYLVIA  stands up and whispers) "Kasia!"
Sister Monica: Holy Shit!  (they dont realise that Sylvia is upset)
Sister Amanda: They say she actually got off on this.
(Silvia is turned on by the scene - reacting to  the whips)
Sister Monica: More than once (replying to Sister Amanda)
SIster Anna: what a pervert!
Sister Sylvia: She's not a pervert.  (Drops bible) 
Sister Anna; Sorry?!
Sister Sylvia:..er.. I mean. she's a victim.
SIster Monica: Yeah a victim of her own perversion. (they laugh)
Sister Amanda: Jeez what kinda of weirdo would enjoy getting whipped to orgasm?
Sister Monica; It takes all sorts sister.
The Bell rings
Sister Monica: (Stubs out fag) No rest for the wicked. Come on sisters before Mother Superior decides to whip us.
Sister Anna: Hopefully not too orgasm! (they all laugh and leave - Sylvia stands alone looking at the screen as Kasia looks back from the screen.
Sister Sylvia: Oh Sylvia, you fool. (looks up) I'll get you for this, if its the last thing I do!
7.00 MINS

SCENE 4 (MOTHER SUPERIORS OFFICE) 
(FILM DITA AND SABINA DOUBLE AT ROSA COELI)(LONG SHOTS, ETC)  

[UNFILMED VERSION]

Mother Superior: (looking out the window) Goddamit Nowak.  You're a good nun. One of the best. I'll sure hate to see you go. But I know that once your mind's made up there's nothing I can do about it. 
Sister Sylvia: Thanks for understanding. Once I've completed my mission I'd like to return.
Mother Superior:There'll always be a place for you here Sister Sylvia. But somehow I feel you won't be coming back. You can keep your uniform but you'll have to hand in your badge.
Sister Sylvia: (takes of crucifix and lays it on the table) Thank you.
Mother Superior: I always knew this day would come. I just didnt think it would be so soon. God I wish it was a bitch of a sister Amanda going instead of you, I hate her guts. Oh well, good Luck Sister Sylvia and goodbye.
Sister Sylvia: Thank you sir. 
(1.00)

[FILMED VERSION]

SCENE 4 - version 2 (MOTHER SUPERIORS OFFICE)
(FILM DITA AND SABINA DOUBLE AT ROSA COELI)(LONG SHOTS, ETC 
knock on door.
Mother Superior: (doing crossword) Enter. (Sylvia walks in) Aahh Sister Sylvia... what can I do for you?
Sister Sylvia: Well Mother Superior ...
Mother Superior: (butts in - reading paper) ...somthing that can give a nun a sense of well being and immense inner pleasure. Eight letters, begins with CL....
Sister Sylvia: ...( thinks) "Clitirus?"
Mother Superior: Ah "Cloister" (Different versions, (teacherly, didnt hear). Ok Shoot.
Sister Sylvia: I'm afraid, Mother Superior. I have to leave the order? Something has come up and I need to resolve it, once and for all.
Mother Superior: I see, well I hate to see you go. But I know that once your mind's made up there's nothing I can do about it. 
Sister Sylvia: Thanks for understanding. Once I've completed my mission I'd like to return.
Mother Superior:There'll always be a place for you here Sister Sylvia. But somehow I feel you won't be coming back. You can keep your uniform but you'll have to hand in your badge.
Sister Sylvia: (takes of crucifix and lays it on the table) Thank you.
Mother Superior: I always knew this day would come. I just didnt think it would be so soon. God I wish it was a bitch of a sister Amanda going instead of you, I hate her guts. Oh well, good Luck Sister Sylvia and goodbye.
Sister Sylvia: Thank you Mother Superior.
(2.00)

SCENE 4 - version 2 (MOTHER SUPERIORS OFFICE)
(FILM DITA AND SABINA DOUBLE AT ROSA COELI)(LONG SHOTS, ETC)  (24C-DAY1)
knock on door.
Mother Superior: (doing crossword) Enter. (Sylvia walks in) Aahh Sister Sylvia... what can I do for you?
Sister Sylvia: Well Mother Superior ...
Mother Superior: (butts in - reading paper) ...somthing that can give a nun a sense of well being and immense inner pleasure. Eight letters, begins with CL....
Sister Sylvia: ...( thinks) "Clitirus?"
Mother Superior: Ah "Cloister" (Different versions, (teacherly, didnt hear). Ok Shoot.
Sister Sylvia: I'm afraid, Mother Superior. I have to leave the order? Something has come up and I need to resolve it, once and for all.
Mother Superior: I see, well I hate to see you go. But I know that once your mind's made up there's nothing I can do about it. 
Sister Sylvia: Thanks for understanding. Once I've completed my mission I'd like to return.
Mother Superior:There'll always be a place for you here Sister Sylvia. But somehow I feel you won't be coming back. You can keep your uniform but you'll have to hand in your badge.
Sister Sylvia: (takes of crucifix and lays it on the table) Thank you.
Mother Superior: I always knew this day would come. I just didnt think it would be so soon. God I wish it was a bitch of a sister Amanda going instead of you, I hate her guts. Oh well, good Luck Sister Sylvia and goodbye.
Sister Sylvia: Thank you Mother Superior.
(2.00)

SCENE 5 - SYLVIA WALKS THROUGH THE HILLS.  
Props: Farmers Jacket, green boots, stick, flat cap, fake lamb, 

Sound of Music type shots with Sound of music building to a crescendo (maybe about to sing - starts to run, arms wide, spins round) when:-
Farmer:  Oi you! 
Sister Sylvia: (close) Me?
Farmer: You're on private land!
Sister Sylvia:  Sorry, I didnt realise. After all, its all God's land isn't it?
Farmer: And God gave this land to me... and  you're trespassing! (walks over - maybe walks round looking her up and down - Sylvia looks embarrassed)
Sister Sylvia: Jeez you lot are all the same.
Farmer: What do you mean "you lot"?
Sister Sylvia: Farmers
Farmers: Oh I see.
Sister Sylvia: .. (changes subject)... I'm looking for a hotel. Can you recommend one?
Farmer: Sure, in the next town (Points). Hotel Sordeed next to the railway station. You'd better get your skates on if you want to make it by nightfall.
Sister Sylvia:  Thank you (Walks off)
Farmer: Hey bitch. What are you going to do for me?
Sister Sylvia:  (Shouts back): I'll pray for you!
Farmer: (Abit jewish) oi you'll pray for me, I'll pray for you, you dumb schmuck.  (Lambs bleat) Aah get out of here!

(2 mins)

SCENE 6 (Nightfall in the town - redlight district - Neon signs, etc - Blue screen - Tripod all shots) 

Sylvia walks past hookers....
1st hooker: Hello Sister, are you looking for a good time? (could be same girl that plays Sister Maria/News Reader)
Sister Sylvia:(Nervous) ...er... no thanks..
Sylvia enters the run down El Sordeed. A sleazy hotel recoptionist waits in side.. string vest, cigar, dirty and sweaty)
Sister Sylvia: Any room in the inn?
Hotel Receptionist: Not for a nun, they're always trouble.
Sister Sylvia: I won't be.
Hotel Receptionist: Don't give me that. You all come here, hollier than thou and then you soon realise you are holly, you're full of them and you want to start using them, sometimes all at the same time! Its like years of being couped up has driven you crazy for sex and any other vice that's going! I run a respectable establishment and I don't need that!
Sister Sylvia: I won't be any trouble,  I promise.
Hotel Receptionist:  You look like a nice nun, I'll give you a break and maybe you can repay me one day.
Sister Sylvia: How?
Hotel Receptionist: : I'm sure you can think of something. Here's your key.
Sister Sylvia: (takes key and reads it) Room 69. Thanks You won't regret it.
Hotel Receptionist: : I  hope I don't.. (watches her walk off)... hmmm nice ass!

(2.00 min)

SCENE 7 (Hotel room with door to bathroom halfway along wall) 
Sylvia walks into the room puts case on the bed. Opens it and takes out a dress and wash bag. She walks into the other room (bathroom). Camera fixes on the door...few seconds pass...door opens.. sylvia walks out in grey suit, her down (Big music)
Sylvia: Right now down to business (Picks up phone -dials - rings -someone answers)
Voice: Yes.
Sylvia: Okay I'm ready.

(1.00min) 

SCENE 8 (Mother Superiors Office) - (4N - DAY 1)
Mother Superior is reading extremist pamphlet in office - knock at the door.
Mother Superior: Come in. (Hides mag)
Gestapo type guy walks in with 2 Police men. (Poss 2 girls in masks)
Gestapo Guy: Mother Superior I presume. It seems that you hold an allegiance to a certain outlawed pro democracy party.
Mother Superior: How did you find out?
Gestapo Guy: Meet sister Amanda - the new Mother Superior.
(Amanda walks forward and grins)
Mother Superior: You Bitch.
Gestapo Guy: Now, Now, is that anyway to speak to your new boss.  {close} I'm going to enjoy interogating you. Guards take her away!

(1.00min) 

BACK AT THE HOTEL ROOM  (31K - DAY 5)
Sylvia Paces with a fag, edgy. Door knocks. Sylvia opens door.
Andy: Hi I'm Andy, people call me Easy.
Sylvia: What kept you?
Andy: The traffic. Still I'm here now. So I hear you want to buy a gun?
Sylvia: You got a 44  Magnum? 
Andy: It's an expensive weapon.
Sylvia: That's alright, I got money.
Andy (opens case) : It's a real monster. It'll stop a car at yards. Put a round through the engine block. Here you go. (hands it to her Sylvia tries it out).  It's a premium, high-resale weapon. Look at that. That's a beauty. I could sell this gun to some jungle bunny in Harlem for $500. (Sylvia points out window - see subjective view) But I just deal high quality goods to the right people. How 'bout that? This might be a little too big for practical purposes. In which case for you, I'd recommend a 38. snub-nose. Look at this. Look at that. That's a beautiful little gun. It's nickel-plated, snub-nose. Otherwise the same as a service revolver. That'll stop anything that moves. A Magnum, they use that in Africa for killing elephants. That . that's a fine gun. Some of these guns are like toys. That 38. you go out and hammer nails with it all day... come back and it'll cut dead center on target every time. It's got a really nice action to it and a heck of a wallop. You interested in an automatic? It's a Colt 45. automatic. It's a nice little gun. It's a beautiful little gun. Holds six shots in the clip, one shot in the chamber. That's if you're dumb enough to put a round in the chamber. Here, look at this. A 37. Walther. Holds eight shots in the clip. That's a nice gun. That's a beautiful little gun. Look at that. During World War II, they used this gun to replace the P45 . Just given out to officers. Isn't that a little honey? - 
Sylvia: I'll take it? - 
Andy: Now, Only a jackass would carry that cannon in the streets like that. Here. Here's a beautiful handmade holster I had made in Mexico. Forty dollars..How 'bout some dope? Grass, hash, coke... (SYLVIA SHAKES HEAD) mescaline, downers, Nembutal, toluol, chloral hydrates? - How 'bout uppers, amphetamines?
Sylvia: I'm not interested in that stuff. 
Andy: I can get you crystal meth. Nitrous oxide. How 'bout that? I can get you a brand-new Cadillac with the pink slip for two grand. 
Sylvia: I told you, I'm not intersted. Now how much.
Andy: Lets see, the holsters $40, $350 for the snub nose.... aeh make it $400.
Sylvia: (raising gun and aiming) No I said, How much? (Cocks trigger and points at wallet pocket in jacket.)
Andy: (Andy raises his hands, surpised, doesnt understand at first then) oh
Sylvia nods a smile (as if that's right)... Andy takes out wallet
Andy: (Holding wallet) About $900
Sylvia: OKay, place it on the bed and say goodbye.
(3.00)

ALTERNATIVE: SYLVIA SHOOTS HIM (Scene was used in the end).
Sylvia: How would you like you payment?
Andy: I only take cash
Sylvia: Shame, I was hoping you'd take lead
(shoots him)

SCENE 9 THE INTREOGATION ROOM  
MOTHER SUPERIOR is tied naked on the table.  Ring gag, tit tied, siting on shins - bent at knees leaning back...wrists tied to ankles.

GESTAPO GUY: Ahhh look at you now Mother Superior! I wonder when was the last time you were naked and prostrate  infront of a man. If ever. How does it feel displaying your crown jewels to a complete stranger. Humiliating,  or maybe just a little arousing (Caresses her body). Does your body tingle with fear...... anticipation.....guilt and maybe excitement. After all, under your habit you really just a women as it is plain for all to see. So I was thinking, what would be the best way to toture a woman of the cloth... Pain  (lashed her with his flogger) or pleasure (sticks his fingers in her pussy and raises her up).  Pain or pleasure.....
MS:  I won't tell you anything
Gestapo guy:  Oh you'll regret that.well it looks like we'll just have to whip the truth out of you.

(8 00 mns)

SCENE 10: AN OLD HOUSE ON A HILL.  SYLVIA WALKS PAST AND RINGS DOORBELL. The Door opens. (33L-DAY 5)
Props: House on Hill with big path

Old Lady: Yes?
Sylvia: Hello my name is Sylvia Nowak. I've come to see The Fantom Whipper.
Old Lady: I'm afraid he's out my dear.
Sylvia: Oh where may I find him?
Old Lady: He works for the securitate in the town Center.He's their chief interrogator. He just loves whipping confessions out of suspects and he's very successful.
Sylvia:You mean all you have to become is an anti-establishment figure and he'll whip you to orgasm?
Old Lady: Well if you put it like that, yes. I think some of the female suspects quite enjoy it, the randy bitches!
Sylvia: If only I'd known.
Old Lady: Sorry?
Sylvia: Nothing. Thanks for your help. Do you work for the Fantom Whipper?
Old Lady:: No dear, I'm his mum.
Sylvia - slightly stunned

(1.00)

SCENE 11  MARIA'S WHIPPING SCENE - ALL FILMED

(15.00 min)

SCENE 12 (CORRIDOR AND OFFICE) 
After Maria's  whipping. Fantom Whipper and guard (FW still wearing black mask)
Guard: Another happy customer. I lost count of the times she came.
FW: They're all the same, from hookers to nuns, as soon as they feel that whip on their clitoris the flood gates open.
Guard: Do you think she knows anything?
FW: Not really.
Guard: So why is she refusing to speak?
FW: To prolong the pleasure
(They both laugh -  FW goes to his office. It is dark. He starts to take of his black mask to reveal his FW face - Sylvia sits in th dark and lights a fag)
Sylvia: (Face in the dark) Well, well, long time no see...
FW: Who's there?
Sylvia: (walks into the light) Remember me?
FW: Why Miss Sylvia Nowak. What a pleasant surpise..... And to what do I owe this pleasure?
Sylvia: I think you know why I'm here.
FW: Don't tell me you've come back for more.
Sylvia: Its all I can think about. My body craves for it.
FW: I see. Orgasms such as these come at a price as you know. Do you have the requisit funding?
Sylvia: Enough for a hundred orgasms.
FW: very good, so I shall see you tonight at midnight... You know what to bring.
Sylvia: So the price hasn't gone up since I've been away.
FW: I'm not greedy.
Sylvia: Hmmm (Iike a laugh) Then Its a date...... (walks to door)  I'll look forward to it.
FW: And so shall your pussy.  (closes door)

(2.00 mins)

SCENE 13  back in the hotel room  (33-O) 

Sylvia in bed.... naked under the sheets, but in the (semi moonlight) dark. restless she wakes and sits up.
SYLVIA VOICE OVER: It was a dangerous game I was playing and I knew it. Just the  thought of being whipped was getting me excited, but I knew that could never happen. I was here for one thing, to avenge the death of Kasia. I started to imagine how she must have felt being stripped naked and whipped by those thugs. The pain, the humiliation and the over whelming pleasure. I was becoming confused. I knew what I had to do, but my body was craving for something else. The images of Kasia's torment kept flashing through my mind, I was breathing harder, sweating and becoming aroused... and wet. My body craved to be put out of its misery. I couldn't see him like this. I was a sexual time bomb. I had to find something to satiate my desire. I needed a little help, but there was nothing (looking around), except (seeing the gun - takes it, licks it, sucks it). The pressure was building up and I had to release it. (Runs gun down body) I must be mad, I thought. I felt I was being driven mad with desire (Thrusts it in), As I felt the cold metal enter me it sent   a jolt of electricty through my entire body. I started thrusting harder. The excitement was overwhelming. I new it was fully loaded. I cocked the trigger. Images of  the Whipper's victims flashed passed me, I thrust deeper, faster. harder -squeezing the trigger slightly.. any second it could fire....the thought excited me even more ... and then I    (Groans) came.

(3 mins)

SCENE 14 (BACK AT THE HOUSE - NIGHT TIME) (OUTSIDE

Sylvia pennsively walks up to the house - wearing suit and handbag. Stands at the door.
Sylvia: Here goes nothing.  (rings doorbell)   come on you old bat...
(after a while door opens)
Old Lady:  Ahh  hello dear. So nice to see you again. (old lady has marigold gloves and is cleaning - bucket and mop on the floor)
Sylvia: I have an appointment with the Fantom Whipper.
Old Lady: Of Course you do. Come in, he's waiting for you
 (FIND INSIDE LOCATION  (36S-DAY 6)
Sylvia: Thankyou (walks in - stand in hallway).
Old Lady: You must be looking forward to being whipped to  orgasm
Sylvia: That's between me and my pussy.
(Old lady looks at drops on the floor between her legs)
Old Lady: Well maybe you need to teach yur pussy to keep its mouth shut.
Sylvia: Oops (looks down and up) sorry.
Old Lady: And  next time will you do me the favour of wearing pants, I've just had the floor cleaned.
Sylvia: I am wearing pants.
Old Lady: I see well maybe you should shove a tampon up there, you obviously juice up easily.
Sylvia: I will... now can we move on.
Old Lady: Yes of course. I'm afraid I am going to have to ask you to strip.
Sylvia: Strip? Why?
Old Lady:: well we don't want a repeat of last time.
Sylvia: But...but...
Old Lady: Strip or leave...
Sylvia: but... I...
Old Lady: Strip or leave... you have 5 seconds.
Sylvia: Okay... okay.. I'll do it.  (sylvia starts to strip)
Old Lady:.. and your bra and pants.
Sylvia hands bra to Old lady  then pants
Old Lady: (Smells pants) eegh these are fit for one thing... the bin. (looks at her) Hmmm nice body. Okay face the wall. (Feels her up and down) Lets se if there's anything up here (points midde finger) and shoves up her bum.
Sylvia: Aaagh!
Old Lady: Ok turn around. (Sylvia faces the old lady)
Old lady feels her body/
Old Lady: anything in here? (pointing to pussy)
Sylvia: Of course not!
Old Lady: Well lets just see (shoves fingers in - Sylvia goes up on tip toes) Okay you're all clear... if a little wet. Okay go down to the dungeon, he's waiting for you.
Sylvia: CAn I take my handbag, I feel naked without it.
Old Lady: OF course. now hurry, you're keeping him waiting
(Sylvia leaves as Old Lady mops the floor)

(3.00 mins)
(CELLAR - SKLIPEK -    

Sylvia decends the stairs.
Sylvia: Hello? Anyone there?
(Dungeon room - stoney look, torches on wall)
The Fantom Whipper walks from the shadows
FW: I'm so glad you came.
Sylvia: Well I haven't come yet.
FW: We'll soon fix that (Slashes whip .- Sylvia flinches)
Sylvia: I see you've still got it.
FW: And I see you still want it.
Sylvia: You'll never know how bad. My nipples are like bullets just thinking about the punishment you'll be unleashing on my bare naked body.
FW: And how about your pussy (cracks whip)
Show close up of end of whip hitting pussy - 
Sylvia: Yeeesss
FW: Steady on we don't want you coming just yet
Sylvia: Oh?
FW: Havent we forgotten one thing
Sylvia: What's that.
FW:The money...... 
Sylvia: oh
FW: You do have the money, don't you?
Sylvia:  Yes of course  (She looks at handbag-  hand slowly goes to open it - Fantom looks cautious - ) Yes its time for your payment isn't it. And here it is (Gets out money)
(Voice over -(holding money out) I'm sorry Kasia, why didnt I go for the gun. Am I so pathetic that the thought of my own sexual gratification over rides my desire for your revenge. What have I done? 
FW: Good girl. Put it on the table so I can count it.
Sylvia:  (Voice over)  My addiction is returning. Once I feel the first lash of the whip the fight will be over. I will be his forever. I must fight it. God, My legs are like jelly, my swollen clitoris is throbbing with desire. This is insane. Why don't you do something Sylvia, save yourself. But I want to be whipped so bad, as only he knows how. I must resist him..
FW: Good its all here now (Turns) -(See Sylvia Pointing a gun at his face) what's this.
Sylvia:  Get back. Over by the wall.
FW: Why?
Sylvia:  Because of you Kasia is dead. AND now you'll pay.
FW: Your making a mistake Sylvia. (PIcks up whip) This is what you want. Don't fight it. 
Sylvia:  Shut up.
FW: Are you going to say goodbye to all you crave for  just for some stupid slut. 
Sylvia: Say your prayers fantom Whipper! (Clicks gun)
Old Lady: Anyone for tea? (Holding tea tray)
(Sylvia  turns - fantom cracks whip and gun is thrown out of hand - lands on sandwiches on tray)  
FW: Two sugars in mine, mother. (turns to Sylvia) Okay bitch are you ready for your whipping now
Sylvia: No wait...
Old Lady: I think the slut doth protest too much. You should see the mess she made of our reception.
FW: Don't think I didnt hear about your little di-tox at the Nunnery Sister Sylvia. I must say It was very courageous of you to come back here for the sake of your  friend, but I'm not sure she was worth it. To be honest, she became such a  cum junky I got bored of whipping her. It was just too easy making her orgasm. I prefer my fillies to put up a fight. Someone like you. A born again Nun, someone trying to fight the addiction. But you know what they say "once an addict always an addict!" Mother tie her hands high 
MOther ties her hands to a rope and pulls her hands high
Old Lady:  Ha!! you thought you could get the better of us, you stupid bitch. I'm going to enjoy watching your total humiliation.
FW:  From now on Sister Slut the only thing you'll answer to is the whip and your throbbing pussy as it craves it's next uncontrolable orgasm.
Sylvia: You bastard. You can't do this to me.
FW:  Mother will you gag this slut please.
Old Lady:  With pleasure (gags Sylvia)
FW: Ok, let the whipping begin.
Starts to whip with bull whip.  Then moves onto coach, whip, flogger, crop. Fade differnt scenes.
FW: Okay that's enough for one day. I lost count of the times you came. Still we must be careful you don't overdose on Orgasms. Mother take her down. WE will resume your re-initation tomorrow, meanwhile this will be your new home (Shows a breathless Sylvia a cage with straw). There you are, all the comforts of home.
(write on wall with chalk - a 1)
FW:  This is day one, just so that you don't lose track of time.  By the time we are finished you're body will be so addicted to the whip that your body will go into spasms if it doesnt have its daily orgasm. So get some rest and we'll  resume tomorrow
(leaves)
Old Lady:  And here's  your state of the art toilet (places a metal bucket in the cell). Locks door and leaves (turns round) Night night, don't let the rats bite.

(10 mins) (66 mins)

(Shot of moon)

Light goes on... Old Lady comes in.. with dog food in a bowl....
Old Lady: Good morning and how are you. (looks in the bucket) My you have been busy!
Old Lady: Okay bitch, Here's your breakfast. YOur only meal of the day, so enjoy it.
Sylvia: What is it?
Old Lady:well aren't you the little princess. Trust me, you dont' want to know. Now eat.
Sylvia: Dont you have any utencils?
Old Lady:: What do you think this is? The RitZ? Use your hands. And hurry up
Syvlia shovels the food in wth her hand...
Old Lady: (Pushes bowl into her face) Faster Bitch! Oh you are a messy eater. Looks like we need to wash that face. (Pushes head into bucket) There thats better.. (Pulls head out) ... Oooh missed a bit (throws head back in)
FW:  Is she ready yet mother.. I want to get started!
Old Lady: Yes dear (still holding her in the bucket) Almost ready. (Pulls her out of the bucket) Okay bitch, time for your first orgasm of the day (pulls her out by a lead - maybe dog collar)

(Show stone on wall writing days in lines)
Sylvia: (Voice over) DAy after day he whipped, beat and humiliated me. I tried to keep track of the days but my head was spinning, all I seemed to do was eat, orgasm, sleep.

dissolves of different ingenious whippings
Lying on back on a vaulting horse or table hit with a flogger ...... taped up with black plastic tape and whipped,... bum over bar being canned .....tied to wheel on floor and pussy whipped... maybe strimmer while he reads the paper.... hands hels high with feet on two paint pots coach whipped....

Sylvia: (VOICE OVER) and then one day...
FW:  I'm afraid I'll be going away for a few days so unfortunatley no more whippings for a while
Sylvia: But... (VOICE OVER)   I was shocked, how would I survive. By now my tolerance level was so high I needed to be whipped to Orgasm at least 5 times a day. How would my body react?
FW:  Mother will bring you your food as usual. And if your withdrawal symptoms are too much, you can always use this maybe it will help sooth the pain until I return  (Leaves Vibrator out side cage - Fantom walks off..... hand slowly comes out - takes vibrator and you here the machine switched on -- Dissolve to days being ticked off, food arriving, lying shaking, peeing in bucket, wanking,  battery dying thoring vib away, shaking more,  unfinished food....

Light goes on....  Sylvia goes to cage door

FW:  I'm back. Did you miss me? Okay let here out mother.....get her ready....
(Ties her up, hands high - Sylvia shaking and looking dishevled)
FW:  I expect you've been looking forward to this. And after you cum I will give you your first task. Understand?
Sylvia Nods yes.
FW: Good. And if I whip you, you will agree to perform this task, whatever it maybe.
Sylvia: (Nods)
FW: Good. So lets begin.
Sylvia: (VOICE OVER) It was wonderful to feel the lash of the cruel whip against my body. How I'd missed I could feel my orgasm building like a long dormant volcano about to erupt
(Slow motion coach whipping scene until Sylvia comes - maybe shoots out water or pees in slow motion - hangs passed out)
FW: (walks up slaps her face) See what happens when you're deprived of the pleasure you need. (Unties her). Now here is you task. The St Benedicts Nunnery of Magdelena on the Hill houses a very rare Rembrendt. I want it.
Sylvia: But that's my old Nunnery. You can't ask me to steal from there.
FW:  Its not open to debate. 
Sylvia: But..
FW: Either you want to be whipped to orgasm or not.
Sylvia: You know I do.
FW: Then you have know choice. Now you know the location of the painting?
Sylvia: Yes, its kept in the tower.
FW: Good. Now here are all the tools you'll need plus a few items if you should get into any trouble. And this is what you'll wear, Now go and get ready.
Old Lady: (walks over) Do you trust her?
FW: Oh yes Mother. Her body is already craving its next session. She's too depend to even think of anything else, and look out anyone who gets in her way.

(10 mins)

(Gun, Knife, Rope, Machine gun, catsuit, hooded mask, (maybe gloves)(Black shows) crow bar) -torch

The Theft:  (castle like room - sklipek)
Sylvia in black leotard and black mask with bag. She gets out wrope with hooks and  climbs castle wall (film on side) climbs inside (see what is on offer to use - may film day for night-)

Sylvia sneaks into room with torch...  finds picture. Starts to take if rom the wall. Suddenly a light goes on (maybe lamp - or oil lamp).
Sister A: Sister Sylvia what are you doing here.
Sister Sylvia: ..er... I came back yesterday. Didnt you hear...?
SIster A: No?   Why are you dress like that?
Sister Sylvia: (Looks down and up) Oh Gosh. I must have been sleep walking.
Sister A: That's strange. Actually I fell asleep too. I was just sitting looking at the wondeful Rembrandt and I must have dozed off. Hey, where has it gone? 
SIster Sylvia: Its here, I was just looking at it. 
Sister A: You shouldn't touch it, its very fragile.
Sister Sylvia: I know, its just so lovelly I couldn't help myself. (Puts it back) There, is that better.
Sister A: You'd better get back to bed... its very late.
Sister Sylvia: Its good to see you again Sister Anna.  I really missed you.
SIster A: I missed you too.
SIster Sylvia: No I really, really missed you...... You were all I could think about.
SIster A: Sister Sylvia?
SIster Sylvia: You look so beautiful in the moonlight.
SIster A: No Sylvia stop.
Sister Sylvia: I know you're attracted to me, like I am to you. Why fight it.
Sister A: No we mustn't... no..no
(They start to kiss (and go on to bed) Sister A protests but enjoys as well.... then Sylvia grabs a pillow sticks it over Sister A's head. She still fughts so Sylvia draws a knife and stabs her through the pillow with one plundge into the face- Sister Anna shakes for a bit then goes limp pulls knife back all blood)

SHOOT OUT IN NUNNERY  
(BLOOD, GUN, BLACK LEOTARD, BLACK HOOD, MACHINE GUN)

In the hall Sylvia is walking down the stairs with the picture she just gets to the Door when suddenly

Sister B: Hey stop!  (Squeeze zoom in on her- Sister Sylvia turns) Sister Sylvia. What are you doing here? Huh! What are you doing with the painting?
Sister C: (Suddenly comes out to join her) She's stealing it.
SIster D: (comes out to) Stop her she's stealing the painting!
Sylvia: Oh shit 
(gets out gun and shoots the nuns - then as they are moaning goes to finish them off.. Show shot from behind Sylvia, nuns are on the floor - one trys to escape up the stairs and is shot in the back - Another lies groaning- she shoots her then sees another has escaped  along the floor - she goes after her shooting her in the back until she's out of bullets. Suddenly a nun screams from the balcony "Oh my God!". Sylvia looks up  with an "I don't believe it look", takes out Machine gun from her bag and fits magazine then Goes up the stairs - see the nunnery from outside with windows flashing light and machine going off fade to picture in the hands of FW)

BACK AT THE HOUSE  (37T-DAY 6)
FW: You've done well.  This will earn you an excellent whipping....  Hmmm.  There seems to be some blood on the frame. I hope there was no trouble
Sylvia: None.
FW: None? I see then why is your pistol empty?
(Sylvia doesnt answer)
Old Lady: (Checks magazine of AK47) And the magazines empty too.
FW: I hope you haven't done anything silly.
Sylvia: Look you've got the painting haven't you? I did as you asked.
FW: Thats true and so you shall be whipped. Mother prepare her.
Old Lady:This way my dear.
(She Grabs Sylvia roughly and places her bum over a pole with hands tied to heels - Fantom walks over. Today, we'll try something new - rips piece at bum.... and starts to flag/paddle her bum..... the phone rings)
FW: Excuse me a moment (goes to answer the phone) Ah Inspector Brennon,
Brennon: You've heard about the massacre at the nunnery.
FW:..er..I did hear something.
Brennon: ..some one went on the rampage with a machine gun, killing all the sisters. Who could have done such a thing?
FW: I wonder.
Brennon: The town is in an uproar, they want blood. 
FW: I'm not surpised.
Brennon:The police have to respond. THey will be doing a house to house search, they will leave no stone unturned to catch the killer....
FW: I see.
Brennon: They're bringing in highly trained sniffer dogs. I know how you enjoy your extra cirricular activities, If you have anything there you don't want them to find, I suggest you get rid of it tonight.
FW: THat would seem like good advice.
Brennon: we never spoke of this, understand.
FW: Of course not. Well thanks for the information.
Brennon: Don't mention it. We have to watch each other backs.
FW: So true.
Brennon: Goodnight 
FW: Goodnight  inspector Brennon. (puts phone down) No time for that now mother (Mother standing with strap on dildo). There's beena  change of plans. How would you like to be whipped al fresco. Imagine the cold air against your next skin. It would only  heighten the sensation (they untie her) I bet your getting wet just thinking about it.

FINAL SCENE: (16FX DAY 2) 
Drive in the country. Car stops. Open back. Sylvia gets out naked cuffed behind and gagged.  

FW: Okay out you get, Lets go for a little walk
(Takes her to a spot)
FW: Lets add a little sensory depravation to highten the senses. (Old bag places sack over Sylvia's head- Sylvia starts getting nervous)
FW: Are you ready for your punishment? OKay mother you know what to do. (mother takes gone and walks over to Sylvia- shoots her
one shot (looks straight at Old Lady - sylvia breathing hard - FW lights fag.. ) old  lady - 2nd Fw- 3rd long shot - shot of sylvia lying on ground as dead (hole in bag)... they walk off...)
FW: Good meat gone bad, we had no choice.
Old bag: But son, shouldn't we bury her incase someone finds the evidence.
FW: Oh the wolves will do a much better job than we ever could...  (wolves howling)
They stop at the car:
Old Lady: I can't think of anythong worse than having your dead body being eaten by wolves.
FW: I can. 
Old Lady: Oh what's that?
FW: Having your live body eaten by wolves  (they both laugh - get in car and drive off)

Cut to scene of  syliva lying - starts to breath then wolf howls and growls nearer.

THE END